So the commentary meme worked in that I have been writing fic again!

Really weird fic that will probably never see the light of day, but at least I'm heading back toward the groove.

Also seekingferret introduced me to the Paradelle poetic form, which is v. v. dangerous.

Meanwhile, I have remembered why I write fiction: because talking about this stuff in plaintext is hard. Anyway, lannamichaels requested most of the last half of Mu, which is a Dresden Files kinkmeme story. Here is the best I can do for commentary!

Commentary is in italics and font color=blue; story is in normal.

( For some reason (and I'm guessing Lea), Mouse gets turned into a human. )

(commentary meme is still open, no promises on speed.)