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ext_1512 ([identity profile] stellar-dust.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] melannen 2004-01-21 05:50 am (UTC)

What'd'you think about the strangely-colored dreams in Demons, from this perspective?

Yay for Krycek and Pusher stuff! I do wish they'd come back to the colorblindness thing at some point on the show. At least I don't recall any outright contradictions. Small favors.

Doesn't percieve things the way normal ... i before e except after c!

where it seems they ended up on half their cases Do you want "they've" instead?

He learned to use things at face value "Take" things at face value?

determination against an enemy as unyeilding of itself as it was of solution i before e?

Everyone I care is destroyed because of my obsessions. care about or care for?

There, you got a beta-reading you didn't even ask for. *Now* it doesn't need revising. (:

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