Actually, your fic has a really clear and excellent bit of character description in it: "You are just a sad, short, white copy with messy hair and glasses.” All you need to know about how Eliot looks, in one sentence of dialog. And it works *really well*. I'm actually trying to analyze how you managed that, now, because it seems to be such a really good way of doing it.

(The whole fic works really well, of course. Also, it made me realize that if I like Leverage this much I should probably get around to watching the A-Team.)