melannen: Commander Valentine of Alpha Squad Seven, a red-haired female Nick Fury in space, smoking contemplatively (Default)
melannen ([personal profile] melannen) wrote 2013-05-15 03:39 pm (UTC)

These are just the first fourteen chapters, as is! Every time I read it I think it feels like he was just going down a list of characterization exercises. (I thought about specifying "a minor character" but I thought I'd leave it open.)
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